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MANS CREEPY PASTA You know who... ENG6

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MANS PIRMAIS CREEPY PASTA taka nekaadi komentaari kaa: SHITAIS IR SUUDS

I was going camping with my friends, Tom and Bob. It was morning, a cold Saturday. I called To ask him if he got all supplies, i coudnt see contacts, so i typed his number and called, but i tiped number wrong, last number was 5 not 4. i wanted to cancel call, but the guy answered, at least i thougt there was someone, it was loud static, nothing more i said Hello? is anybody here? I heard something saying: Do not... I was asking Is this a joke? but to late, he already Left call, Later i called Tom he wodn't answer. At least Bob answered me, he said Tom canot talk to him too! Damn, now we are only two! I drived to his house with bike, but Bob wasn't happy, he said: Now we have to carry more items. After half hour we arrived to Camp place, set up tent and go fishing, But Bob's phone ringed, it was number #88193885... Same number that i was calling! He answered and the voice came, Do not... I said Bob to say who you are? he asked, but the voice became More static, it said You know who... That was kinda creepy, at that moment my friend screamed, he pointed at water, it was blood. Till 7 o clock we havent got any calls, then weird thinks hapened. At moment, there was moon next moment it wasn't there. I hope thats not for long. at 9 o clock we ate marshmallows and go to sleep, it was long night. I always wake up with same nightmare you know who... wait, i thinked it says you KNOW who, who coud it be? i don't think that it was Tom, its not same number! Somehow, i fell asleep... not for long i watched at clock: WHAT!? ITS ONLY MIDNIGHT? wait, where's Bob? I lured out of my tent and heard noise, DO NOT! then i woke up, iwasnt camping no creepy You or dont, just a dream! But when i called my friends, they didnt respond. I go to their houses... they were not there... it was last time i saw my friends. such a nightmare... You know who.

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thinked ? emotionDDD pareiza forma ir thought .

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Laba, bet žēl, ka nav tulkota emotion
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nedaudz kļūdas bija bet tā vispārīgi bija labs stāsts

Man šķiet ka tas You know who ir Voldemorts XD Tā bija pirmā doma kas iešāvās prātā redzot You know who emotion

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Cik nojaušu, tas ir tevis rakstītais, ne tā?

Ja tā ir - pārlasi vēl pāris reižu. Vairākas vārdu pareizrakstības kļūdas, kuras ļoti labi varēja pamanīt, kā arī vietām sajukuši laiki. Ņemšu par piemēru After half hour we arrived to Camp place, set up tent and go fishing, But Bob's phone ringed, it was number #88193885... Izceltā vieta - set up ir domāts pagātnē, taču go vairs nav pagātnes formā, lai gan tas joprojām ir pagātnē.

Nesaku, ka esmu baigā pro angļu valodā, taču manuprāt kaut kas tur kopā neiet. Ja vari izskaidrot, lūdzu, bet ja šis vispār nav tavs stāsts, tad es par velti te pati mokos rakstot komentāru. : D

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Pārtulkot nevareji?-_- Ņem mīnusu!
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Sūdīga gramatika. Sorry vecīt.
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